In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some countries today invest huge sums of money in building infrastructures like railway and roads for public transportation. While some believe that it is more logical to spend a lot of money on constructing the mode of transport mentioned above, others

on the other h

and argue

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that funds should be spent on making the already existing ones better.

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essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why money should be used to improve the other means in place. It is certainly true that fast trains just like the name are one of the fastest methods of transportation. If a car will spend an hour getting to a particular destination, a fast train

in c

ontrast will

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spend about thirty minutes reaching the same place. So why not invest in these advanced locomotives? A research in Havard university depicts it as the most p

refered

more desirable than another

preferred

means of mobility by the masses because of its' time saving quality.In short, some folks will support

this

idea because of

his characteristics.

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these characteristics

this characteristic

However

, other individuals might back the idea for the government to put more on public transportation rather than railways. A case in point is that setting up railways require a lot of resources. A report in the media claims that developed countries like the united states and developing countries like china budgets virtually 50 times for railways when compared to roads and other means.

This

same situation cannot be compared to

third

world countries where there is little or no amount to embark on

such

an expensive project.

In addition

, when these countries decide to go through with it,

such

ndavours

a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

endeavours

are mostly abandoned along the way, merely because of lack of capital to continue.

Therefore

, I believe that dedicating finances to these two options is equally important.

However

, I will advise the leadership of every nation to consider its' pocket before making a decision about which one is better.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, to work or travel. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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