The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The chart illustrates the proportions of Americans who often came
in
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fast
food
restaurants
for eating between 2003 and 2013, divided into six categories. In once
a
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week category, the highest number of people ate in fast
food
restaurants
in both 2003 and
in
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2006 at 31% and 33% respectively,
while
this
figure remained highest in 2013 at 33% for those who moved
in
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into
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the
restaurants
once or twice a month. The
percentages
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percentage
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of US residents who came several times
in
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fast
food
restaurants
was 17% in 2003 and
then
it accelerated to 20% in 2006 before
went
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down to 16% in 2103. For
few
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times a year category, the proportions of Americans remained less in 2003 at 13% but jumped to 15% for both 2006 and 2013. For
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the everyday
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everyday
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and never category,
lowest
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the lowest
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percentages of people,
upto
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up to
maximum
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a maximum
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5
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of 5
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%, were recorded in all
the
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three years.
Thus
, the proportions of US fast
food
lovers fluctuated sharply in almost all the categories but remained in
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the lowest
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figures for those who came on
daily
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a daily
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basis or never.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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