I, along with my wife, had been there to celebrate our wedding anniversary.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my displeasure with the experience I had at your restaurant yesterday.

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the Service itself was fine, there were issues with the meal we were served. I,

along with

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my wife, had been there to celebrate our wedding anniversary. I had an entire evening planned, starting with a

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dinner at the restaurant, followed by a cake cutting at the same venue. We were expecting our friends to join us.

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, none of the above plans worked out

due to

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the chaos created by the incorrect

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served. Let me explain

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the problem, my wife is a vegan and she ordered

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non diary

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food

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. When her dish was served, she

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the ingredients with the waiter and on confirmation, she started eating it. Not only was she served with the

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food

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, but

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it had seafood which she was allergic

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. I had to rush her to the hospital and

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celebrated the anniversary night at the medical canteen. On enquiring, I learnt that the

food

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which was supposed to be served to the table next to

ours'

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was served to us. Is it possible for the restaurant to number the tables? I reckon that system would serve as a solution to the

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issues. I sincerely hope you would personally look into

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issues and prevent them from future

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occurrence

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. Thank you for considering. Your Wellwisher, Sabari Raja A R

Wed Oct 16 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

245 words

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I, along with my wife, had been there to celebrate our wedding anniversary.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Nowadays as a part of the education process students are working for a company for a short period of time without pay. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this ? Give your own opinion

In the future, all cars, buses, and tracks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

Some say that the standard of behavior among children has worsened and that this is their parents’ fault; others say that schools are to blame. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?