Ordinary people try to copy famous people either regarding magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it’s a good idea to copy this people?

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It has been recorded all round the globe that commoners have been significantly trying to

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renowned people. They try to imitate famous personnel by following them on magazines or TV. There are various reasons behind

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followed by its hazardous impact is elaborated in the upcoming section of

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essay. Famous people have massive fan followers and wild craze. It is due to

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craze; people treat celebrities as God and

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every step they take.

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, a crazy fan of footballer Lionel Messi got the tattoo of

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the Barcelona football stadium

on his body as Lionel Messi got one for himself.

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, with the advent of technology, there is easy availability of merchandise.

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, people are often attracted to buy things that are promoted or used by the celebrities. People get the feeling of being cool, trendy and updated amongst their peer.

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brings them a sense of satisfaction and confidence too. Few demographics argue that, it is good to

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famous stars as people are confident and get the feeling of satisfaction. But in my opinion, it is wrong to

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famous people if not catastrophic, for various reasons. In the race to look as close as celebrities, one might lose the individuality. Felicia Green recently underwent

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the knife

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the 12th time

to look exactly like Kim Kardashian but little does she know that all humans are unique and special in their own ways.

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, to buy the same clothes,

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and cosmetics as used by social media

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a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

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lots of money is wasted and those who

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keep up with the trend, are often the victim of bullying. All in all, commoners tend to

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famous celebrities to look cool, fashionable, keep up with trend or with mere craze. But

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is wrong on so many levels as people might lose their individuality and the chances of being left out or bullying will increase, significantly.

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Ordinary people try to copy famous people either regarding magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it’s a good idea to copy this people?

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The internet isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, govenments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?