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Ordinary people try to copy famous people either regarding magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it’s a good idea to copy this people?

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It has been recorded all round the globe that commoners have been significantly trying to
copy
 renowned people. They try to imitate famous personnel by following them on magazines or TV. There are various reasons behind
this
 followed by its hazardous impact is elaborated in the upcoming section of
this
 essay. Famous people have massive fan followers and wild craze. It is due to
this
 craze; people treat celebrities as God and
copy
 every step they take.
For instance
, a crazy fan of footballer Lionel Messi got the tattoo of
Barcelona football stadium
Suggestion
the Barcelona football stadium
 on his body as Lionel Messi got one for himself.
Furthermore
, with the advent of technology, there is easy availability of merchandise.
Thus
, people are often attracted to buy things that are promoted or used by the celebrities. People get the feeling of being cool, trendy and updated amongst their peer.
This
 brings them a sense of satisfaction and confidence too. Few demographics argue that, it is good to
copy
 famous stars as people are confident and get the feeling of satisfaction. But in my opinion, it is wrong to
copy
 famous people if not catastrophic, for various reasons. In the race to look as close as celebrities, one might lose the individuality. Felicia Green recently underwent
knife
Suggestion
the knife
 for
12th time
Suggestion
the 12th time
 to look exactly like Kim Kardashian but little does she know that all humans are unique and special in their own ways.
Furthermore
, to buy the same clothes,
jewelries
 and cosmetics as used by social media
influencers
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influences
 lots of money is wasted and those who
can not
can not
cannot
 keep up with the trend, are often the victim of bullying. All in all, commoners tend to
copy
 famous celebrities to look cool, fashionable, keep up with trend or with mere craze. But
this
 is wrong on so many levels as people might lose their individuality and the chances of being left out or bullying will increase, significantly.
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