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Nowadays there is a trend that media focusses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think this is harmful to individuals and socities. Do you agree?

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It is a known fact that negative events and problems are being shown rather than accomplishments via media lately. I believe while
this
 has a negative effect on the community, it is beneficial for the individuals because they can plan ahead about their visit to the places having critical situations. Ostensibly, negative things are more highlighted by the
media which
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media, which
 can create an awareness for the society because they would know in an advance about any calamity. When people would already be aware of any emergency situation, they will take the preventive measures.
For instance
, a massive earthquake hit the northern areas of Pakistan a few weeks ago. Having been informed about it, the ones who had the plan of visiting those places would have postponed it.
Hence
, one can know ahead about the
particluar
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
 things. As far as the communities are concerned, watching bad things happening all the time would increase the incidence of having psychological problems. The ones who would be the victims will mostly be the children and young ones whose brains are fragile and
they are emotionally not
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they are not emotionally
 strong.
Therefore
, seeing these calamities have
detrimental impact
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a detrimental impact
 on them. A massive flood hit Japan
last
 week and
this
has create
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has created
 panic among the
young adults
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young, adults
 seeing people lying homeless and in severe pain. To conclude,
although
 the individuals would know about the negative happenings and they can plan the things to combat them, societies would be full of mentally upset people.
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