Nowadays there is a trend that media focusses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think this is harmful to individuals and socities. Do you agree?

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It is a known fact that negative events and problems are being shown rather than accomplishments via media lately. I believe while

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has a negative effect on the community, it is beneficial for the individuals because they can plan ahead about their visit to the places having critical situations. Ostensibly, negative things are more highlighted by the

media which

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media, which

can create an awareness for the society because they would know in an advance about any calamity. When people would already be aware of any emergency situation, they will take the preventive measures.

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, a massive earthquake hit the northern areas of Pakistan a few weeks ago. Having been informed about it, the ones who had the plan of visiting those places would have postponed it.

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, one can know ahead about the

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unique or specific to a person or thing or category

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things. As far as the communities are concerned, watching bad things happening all the time would increase the incidence of having psychological problems. The ones who would be the victims will mostly be the children and young ones whose brains are fragile and

they are emotionally not

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they are not emotionally

strong.

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, seeing these calamities have

detrimental impact

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a detrimental impact

on them. A massive flood hit Japan

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week and

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has create

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has created

panic among the

young adults

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young, adults

seeing people lying homeless and in severe pain. To conclude,

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the individuals would know about the negative happenings and they can plan the things to combat them, societies would be full of mentally upset people.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Nowadays there is a trend that media focusses on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think this is harmful to individuals and socities. Do you agree?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that the primary function of a university should be to prepare students for the working world. Others argue that the purpose of a university education is to provide knowledge for knowledge’s sake. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Scientists and news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyles prevent further damage. What are your views?

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