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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
 To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Recycling is a process of converting
waste
 materials into new materials and objects which are suitable for reuse. In my opinion, governments should pass legislation in order to ensure proper recycling of
waste
 materials at domestic level. In ancient times, people had no concept of recycling process. In many parts of the world, all the garbage and
waste
 materials had thrown outside homes or poured into streams or rivers.
Such
 actions of people had not only polluted our environment in the
past but
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past, but
also
 put humans and animals in great trouble. In the present world, people are using different methods to recycle
waste
 products in homes.
For example
, food boxes are used in houses after cleaning.
Similarly
, empty bottles of drinks are frequently used for drinking and storing water. In developing countries, due to absence of recycling laws or lack of public awareness, people are rarely
recycling
Suggestion
recycled
 their domestic
waste
 products. In developed countries, governments have taken impressive initiatives and have enforced strict check and balance over the recycling of
waste
 objects. The governments have
also
 facilitated their residents by providing certain facilities to recycle their
waste
 materials at free of cost.
Thus
, if the efforts of governments and the cooperation of people remained continue
in
Suggestion
on
 improving the standards of recycling
waste
 products at home, the world will certainly become environment friendly in the near future. In my opinion, governments must not only have to take new legal
measures but
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measures, but
also
 have to ensure fair implementation of
existed
Suggestion
existing
 laws to make sure that all the
waste
 materials in homes have gone under recycling process.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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