Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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There is an opinion that any form of strategy needed to ensure a
business
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makes returns should be used to accomplish their goals. I agree with
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viewpoint in as much as the investor need to sustain the market pressure and
also
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remunerate the employees for their
hardwork
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hard work
. Even though some think that some strategies might be deceptive, provided that they are within the laws of the body where the
business
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is being operated
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, it should be applied.
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means that inquiries and comprehensive research
needs
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need
to be made by the management of an
organizations
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organization
before
excuting
putting a condemned person to death
executing
any actions,
such
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as adverts, which will help make
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profit
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a profit
for the organization. If a
business
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owner wants to publicise his goods,
for example
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, even though they would hide the negative impacts of the products, stating all the benefits
in
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of
using
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this products
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this product
these products
is
good strategy
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a good strategy
to lure potential customers.
Consequently
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,
this
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would help boost sales for the organization irrespective of what facts
has been hidden
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have been hidden
since
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from
the
business
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needs to remain in the market as well as make
profit
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. Another reason for doing anything to make
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profit
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a profit
is that the employer needs to pay the employees working for him. If they are selective of
strategizes
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
to apply,
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their
in or at that place
there
might not be remunerated.
In other words
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, the staff members need to be proactive in taking
advertage
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantage
of any opportunities available even if it might not be favourable for some people. To illustrate, during promotions, marketers may know that a particular product might expire in
few weeks but
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a few weeks, but
a few weeks but
because of the bonuses which the
business
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owner has promised them, they will go ahead and sale the products.
As a result
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, they make profits for the company. In
conclusion
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conclusion, although
although
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there might not be transparency in some
business
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strategizes
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
strategists
strategist
, I believe that in order to survive the market pressure and
also
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pay the staff members they should apply any strategies to make
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profit
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profits
a profit
.
Besides
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this
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, provided they are
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
the legal boundaries of the country of operations,
then
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every
steps
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step
should be taken to achieve they organizational goals.

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