Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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There is an opinion that any form of strategy needed to ensure a

business

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makes returns should be used to accomplish their goals. I agree with

this

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viewpoint in as much as the investor need to sustain the market pressure and

also

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remunerate the employees for their

hardwork

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hard work

. Even though some think that some strategies might be deceptive, provided that they are within the laws of the body where the

business

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is being operated

then

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, it should be applied.

This

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means that inquiries and comprehensive research

needs

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need

to be made by the management of an

organizations

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organization

before

excuting

putting a condemned person to death

executing

any actions,

such

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as adverts, which will help make

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profit

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a profit

for the organization. If a

business

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owner wants to publicise his goods,

for example

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, even though they would hide the negative impacts of the products, stating all the benefits

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using

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this products

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this product

these products

good strategy

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a good strategy

to lure potential customers.

Consequently

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this

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would help boost sales for the organization irrespective of what facts

has been hidden

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have been hidden

since

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from

the

business

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needs to remain in the market as well as make

profit

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. Another reason for doing anything to make

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profit

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a profit

is that the employer needs to pay the employees working for him. If they are selective of

strategizes

an elaborate and systematic plan of action

strategies

to apply,

then

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their

in or at that place

there

might not be remunerated.

In other words

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, the staff members need to be proactive in taking

advertage

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

advantage

of any opportunities available even if it might not be favourable for some people. To illustrate, during promotions, marketers may know that a particular product might expire in

few weeks but

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a few weeks, but

a few weeks but

because of the bonuses which the

business

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owner has promised them, they will go ahead and sale the products.

As a result

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, they make profits for the company. In

conclusion

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conclusion, although

although

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there might not be transparency in some

business

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strategizes

an elaborate and systematic plan of action

strategies

strategists

strategist

, I believe that in order to survive the market pressure and

also

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pay the staff members they should apply any strategies to make

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profit

Suggestion

profits

a profit

Besides

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this

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, provided they are

with in

internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of

within

the legal boundaries of the country of operations,

then

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every

steps

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step

should be taken to achieve they organizational goals.

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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