In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some argue that a small number of younger people in several nations watch news on
TV
or read newspapers. The reason for that is that they
use
different means to follow the news and
therefore
, should have the news delivered to them through devices they are using on a daily basis.Younger people do not tend to
readnewspapers
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read newspapers
or watch
TV
since they have
grownup
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grown up
using other items rather than
TV
or
newspapersto
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newspapers to
follow the news or any other events around the world.
Firstly
, they
use
computers, their mobile phones and tend to listen to podcasts and radio in order to follow the news.
Secondly
, the younger people do not wait for
particulartimes
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particular times
to sit
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sit
in front
ofthe
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of the
TV
to watch the news as older people do
,
Accept space
,
but
instead
want to watch whenever they want from whatever device they
use
or carry with them. The solution is to accommodate the younger people and push the news to their devices they
use
. So,
theyhave
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they have
apps that they can upload to their phones and
tabletsas
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tablets as
well as TVs so that they can follow the news from them. The news should be recorded so that they can choose to listen and watch the news whenever they feel like it and is best for them.
For example
, they are waiting for a bus or a train to get them to
schooland
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school and
they can
alsolisten
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also listen
to the recorded news whenever it suits them and wherever they feel like it.The newspapers and
TV
needs
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need
to move to the devices the younger people
use
and they need to have
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the news
available at any time with any
devicefor
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device for
the younger people to access them whenever and
whereeve
where in the world
wherever
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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