Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

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People who live abroad, which force them to speak a foreign

language

is believed to face crucial social and practical issues in balance. In my opinion, as a non-native speaker, practical matters are more possible to occur more than social problems.

This

essay will explain how incorrect foreign

language

usage can affect both problems in society. Practical issues which can be found by people who moved to another country with different

language

may appear every time they have a conversation with natives. If they deliver their thoughts in wrong words and sentences, in instances, the locals will have a

misperception

. As the consequence, they will achieve incorrect response which ruin their goal.

For example

, if someone asks ‘flour’ in an English-speaking country

unclearly

, maybe the

waiter

the atmospheric conditions that comprise the state of the atmosphere in terms of temperature and wind and clouds and precipitation

weather

will give her or him a flower since the pronunciation of these words are similar.

On the other hand

, a matter in a social point of view

also

can be occurred in society due to lack of ability referring to inappropriate

language

usage.

For example

, natives will avoid communicating with foreigners because they want to avoid to the possibility of misunderstanding between them.

Hence

, the foreigners who cannot speak the local

language

clearly may have fewer friends. In conclusion, I believe that practical problems are more important to be considered by people who live in a country with different

language

rather than social problems because the effect can be felt directly when they have an interaction with native speakers.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

245 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
effective communication
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