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Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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There are two modes of
study
 that used in the studying activity at
school
,
group
 and
self
study
. Some people argue that
group
study
 gives more benefits for the students and others believed that
self
study
 have more advantages. Despite all the benefits given by the two models,
this
 essay agrees that combine
both
 models at
school
 can maximize the results from studying process.
This
 essay will discuss
both
 points of view. It is clear that in groups studying can teach the students how to work in a team. With some people includes on the projects, the students can improve their leadership ability on how to work things done effectively by developing a strategy or job description for each member based on their skills and knowledge. It is
therefore
 agreed that
this
model
 has its beneficial roles to make the students understand each others ability and characteristics which is good knowledge at work environment and in the society.
However
, many agree that
self
 studying is more beneficial than
group
study
.
Self
study
 is important to make the students understand their responsibilities. Each student, sometimes, have different responsibilities for
both
 individual and
group
 assignments or tasks at
school
. With
self
study
, the students will learn how to finish the projects effectively using their ability as their strengths to get the expected scores.
This
self
study
also
 can make the students understand more about their weaknesses and trying to find a way to minimize these weaknesses.
This
 essay
also
 agrees that
self
study
 gives many benefits too, because each student may have different weaknesses,
this
model
 can be useful to improve their performance at
school
. In conclusion,
both
study
 models are important to be applied at
school
, because each
model
 brings different benefits needed by the students, which perform to complete each
model
 weaknesses. The combination of
both
 models can maximize the student's performance in their future.

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