Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old building? Should history stand in the way of progress?

A lot of

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monuments are taken care by law enforcement authorities to safeguard a country's heritage. Few individuals believe that aged structures shall be demolished to build modern ones to

accomodate

be agreeable or acceptable to

accommodate

working and living spaces. It is very

cruicial

of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis

crucial

to take care of historic

builings

a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place

buildings

as they are a reminder of a nation's

culture

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and history never stands in the way of modernization if people keep a balance.

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, It is important to safeguard and maintain a nation's historic buildings because they represent the

culture

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of the country. The nations who do not preserve their historic structures,

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

their sense of identity and pride. For

exmaple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

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, in Italy, the government still take it very seriously to safeguard the dated buildings and it is a punishable crime by law if someone is found

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any part of

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area

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, old

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never stands in the way of progress. It is

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the residents of the area to keep a healthy balance of new and old. Nations take pride in their aged monuments and turn them into

meuseums

a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value

museums

. For

instence

an occurrence of something

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, a 300

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old palace of the king in

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Japan, in

Japan is still preserved and attracts millions of visitors yearly.

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The people

of Japan are

proude

feeling self-respect or pleasure in something by which you measure your self-worth; or being a reason for pride

proud

of their history and

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and

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historic buildings are a source of income for the local government as well as

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

. In conclusion, I would emphasize on preserving

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culture

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the culture

of any nation in the world,

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places are our cultural heritage and remind us of our rich and dynamic past. Progress is never hindered by

entique

made in or typical of earlier times and valued for its age

antique

buildings but

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buildings, but

rusted minds.