Some believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can benefit teenagers and the community as well . Do you agree or disagree.
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benefits
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personally disagree with refers to the speaker or writer
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this
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notion
first
sensible argueement
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argument
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view is that community
work
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possible but not necessary; left to personal choice
optional
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an awful effect
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concentrated
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studies
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rather than volunteer work
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extra burden on them which make them failures and spoil their future .
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emerging
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in their
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the place where something begins, where it springs into being
source
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work
which make them experienced person
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personally
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adolescence
audience
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They learn about leadership. Accept space
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advancment
of encouragement of the progress or growth or acceptance of something
advancement
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the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
.
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