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In past the role of teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to wide sources of information. There is, therefore, no role of teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree

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The world is changing and how students have contacted information is
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 greatly improving. In the past, teachers served as the only source of passing details to students in majorly all schools, but
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 is changing as most students now have a direct avenue for data. But some are saying that
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 of
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 easy access to data with the students, there should be no need for teachers in modern education. In my own opinion, I totally disagree that that there is no role of teachers in Modern Education
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 of students having access to data.
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, the internet, as played a tremendous character on how students gain materials and it has widely improved the ability and reasoning of students as they will not only depend on their teachers to get the required details needed for their advancement and sometimes for a research purpose. But the position of the teachers in
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 situation is the ensure that the students are able to use the information in the best way.
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, students may have way to knowledge, often time they don't know how to use it in the right way.
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, when I was writing my final year project, it was so easy for me to get all required data through the internet, but it was difficult putting them together to make a meaningful research. It was at
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 point that my project supervisor played a role as a teacher in ensuring that it was properly arranged.
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, in
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 new age of internet with easy access to google, it is very convenient to have nearly all required information and at
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 the number of teachers required will reduce.
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, it was shown on Television recently in China on how all the facilities in a classroom as being digitalised meaning that there is no need for a teacher in the class.
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, teachers play a key role in the life of students

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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