Task 2 Some shops are open 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Do you think it is a good thing for the customers, shop staff and company as a whole?

In the present times,

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any shops are open day and night for seven days a

week

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to meet the changing business needs. I believe it is beneficial for the end consumer, shop employees and c

ompany

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the company

as a whole. N

owadays if

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Nowadays, if

shops are open for twenty four h

ours seven

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hours, seven

days a

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it is convenient and helps in case of an emergency to consumers.

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, with hectic life s

chedules individuals

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schedules, individuals

rarely get

time

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to purchase their household materials within a given

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period. With shops open day and n

ight seven

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night, seven

days a

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customers can purchase goods like grocery, household items and medicines at any

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without the need to worry about shop opening and closing hours.

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year, when we were on an audit, my colleague was having a problem of acidity post dinner as the medical shops were open we managed to give him the medicines and take care of his health.

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hus shops

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Thus, shops

open for all the

time

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provide convenience and help in emergency cases.

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, when shops are open 24 by 7, it provides higher salaries for employees.

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ords as

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words, as

employees work during the odd hours of the day they are paid better pay as compared to usual salaries with added incentives.

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, it results in better income for employees.

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, for companies the benefits are higher sales and additional profits.

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, the benefits of shops being open all

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and all days are r

ise

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rising

in salary for employees and profits for the company. To conclude, in my opinion, when shops are open 24 hours for all days a

week

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its a

dvantageous

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advantages

for customers as they can shop at their own

time

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and

also

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in case of an emergency.

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will

also

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give higher sales for c

ompany

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the company

companies

and increased salaries for the employees.