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The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998 .

The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998 .
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information about the
production
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cacao
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beans
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 in six regions from 1992 to 1998 years. At a first glance , the
production
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 America was 46000
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 in 1992 and 1998 .
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it was near about 14000
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 decrease in 1994 and 1996 .The number of
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 in Africa . Which was 29000
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 in 1992 .
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 1992 to 1998 the
production
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 continually rose in Asia . Probing
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4000
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tons
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 1994 to 1996 in
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Oceania
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production
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cacao
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 America . Which was 1, 43, 000 in 1992 . but in
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 years . it showed
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upward
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tons
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 in England began
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 56000 .
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 in Asia. than other regions .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, cacao, beans, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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