The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 to 2000.
The given bar chart illustrates the
figure
of
the tourist using three main Change preposition
for
airport
in New York City in 1995 and 2000.
Change to a plural noun
airports
Overall
, both LaGuardia and Newark were upward
Correct article usage
an upward
trend
; Change the noun form
trends
whereas
the number
of John F.Kennedy
Correct your spelling
F. Kennedy
airport
was fluctuated
.
It is clearly seen that the tourist using John K Kennedy Change to the active voice
fluctuated
has fluctuated
airport
just over 25 million
people in 1995. Then
, the figure
decreased sharply in next
two years and reach a peak at 47 Correct article usage
the next
million
. In 1998 and 1999, the number
of travellers using this
airport
increased significal
between 32- 36 Correct your spelling
significant
significantly
million
over the period. That’s luckily the number
rose up
approximately 43 Change preposition
to
million
in 2000.
In
1995 to 2000 the Change preposition
From
figure
of
travellers using LaGuardia increased slightly every Change preposition
for
each
Correct determiner usage
apply
years
and reach a peak at approximately 69 Change to a singular noun
year
million
in 2000. Newark was similar to that one, it began just
over 10 Change preposition
with just
million
which little than two main airport
. But, Change to a plural noun
airports
in
1995 to 1998, that Change preposition
from
number
grewth
dramatically and reach a peak at 41 Correct your spelling
growth
grew
million
. After that
the Add a comma
,that
figure
was unchange
Correct your spelling
changed
in
1999 to 2000.Change preposition
from
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, airport, number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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