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show the changes of the number of visitors in three main major airports in New York city from 1995 to 2000

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an airfield equipped with control tower and hangars as well as accommodations for passengers and cargo
airports
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in New York city from 1995 to 2000. Overall
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it can be seen that the Laguardia airport and Newark airport have upward trend
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and about John F.Kennedy fluctuated From 1995 to 2000, the figure of John F.Kennedy airport had 27 million visitors and in 1995 increased s
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at a steady rate or pace
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by approximately 15 millions in 1996 and 1997
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But in 1998 they decreased about 37 visitors and 32 visitors in 1999
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visitors
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The LaGuardia a
iport
an airfield equipped with control tower and hangars as well as accommodations for passengers and cargo
airport
increased slightly from 45 to 5 visitors
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In 2000 they increased dramatically with 68 visitors
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And the customers of Newark
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they used less than John F.Kennedy and LaGuardia
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but the number of them increased steadily from 1995 to 1997 and no change between 19998 and 2000 with 42 visitors
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