Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Some people argue that in these days and a

ge there

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age, there

are plenty of p

ossibilites

a future prospect or potential

possibilities

for us to choose from,

in other words

we have more options than our ancestors. In my v

iew

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view, this

this

is a correct belief and I completely support

this

notion. The main reason that humankind in t

hesedays

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these days

can choose from a broader v

raiety

a collection containing a variety of sorts of things

variety

of options is that, our understanding and knowledge of our s

urronding

closely encircling

surrounding

has been r

ose

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rising

d

ramaticly

in a very impressive manner

dramatically

and is constantly and e

xponentialy

in an exponential manner

exponentially

increasing.

Therefore

, as we c

oncure

to put down by force or authority

conquer

the world we are producing more p

ossibilites

a future prospect or potential

possibilities

to reach a same goal. Fore i

nstance now

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instance, now

we can travel to any place of the globe, so we are not limited to live in our b

irth place.

the place where someone was born

birthplace

As a result

of development of cheap and easy communication devices we are able to be informed about the phenomenon happening around the world and so we have more a

curate

conforming exactly or almost exactly to fact or to a standard or performing with total accuracy

accurate

information which brings us more choices. Another phenomena that increased our choices is democracy which brought us

freedom

and there no kings or dictators any more to curb choices to some l

imitted

small in range or scope

limited

list because he or she decided. A

n other

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Another

result of liberal governments is that they are based on rules designed by people and as time goes on there is an i

nstinc

inborn pattern of behavior often responsive to specific stimuli

instinct

instance

in humankind to increase her or his

freedom

, and

freedom

means more choices. i

n

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In

conclusion, at the present time people experience

freedom

and development in science which brought them an e

normouse

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

enormous

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collection of options and paths to choose from. In my v

iew it

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view, it

is going to be an ongoing trend toward f

uture.

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the future