Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But other say film should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The rationale behind making movies should be just for recreational purpose, which is a thinking of a large number of people, while another group says that the motive of cinema should not be limited to fun only, but it must have moral values
also
.
This
essay will contemplate into both of the views that why and why not the
weightage
the product of voltage and current
wattage
should be given to the teachings in any story in
film industry
Suggestion
the film industry
with an inclination towards need of getting learnings from pictures.
First
of all, thinking towards the fun factor, in
this
cometitive
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
edge and
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
life, everyone wants some entertainment in their lives;
however
, they understand their liability, it is for the purpose that for some time, they want to forget bad and good and just want to live the virtual life.
Therefore
, having
education pattern
Suggestion
an education pattern
in fun-time seems a bit unfair.
For example
, after a long time
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
work, I wanted to enthralled myself seeing a comedy movie so that I can bring some laugh to forget my stress.
On the other hand
, cinema is a source where one can capture a large group of people, especially youth.
Consequently
, to spread the message on social issues and how to
combat
compete for something; engage in a contest; measure oneself against others
compete
with it; films can be a significant
paltform
a raised horizontal surface
platform
.
For instance
, recently released picture name "Kesari" has just given a beatific lesson to the young people towards the motherland, which people appreciated and taken it in a positive way.
This
way, people enjoyed the story and learnt
also
by
absorbong
capable of arousing and holding the attention
absorbing
the gist. To summarise,
although
it is irrefutable that people go to cinemas for entertainment, it is
also
true that it is
need
Suggestion
the need
of the hour to provide some of the educational messages to the viewers.
Therefore
, it is
imperatibve
requiring attention or action
imperative
to add good teachings to make the people aware about the various issues and its possible solutions.
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