rising university fees and scare employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chance of employment. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In present
scenoria
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
,
numereous
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
issues are raising their heads unemployment is one among them. Whereas
espensive
high in price or charging high prices
expensive
teritary
coming next after the second and just before the fourth in position
tertiary
education and less employment are chance of root causes. The fair amount of people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that universities should offer only particular degree courses and stop teaching arts subject philosophy and history. I do not completely accord with it because it helps
gradutes
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduates
to develop
creativiteis
the ability to create
creativity
and logical thinking. To embark on subjects
such
as philosophy, students learn valuable set of skills
.
Accept space
.
They become active thinker who learn how to
slove
find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of
solve
the problem rather than passive thinkers just to memorise
tha
definite article
the
that
than
fact and other people.
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S's
S
idea.
Philosphy student
Suggestion
The philosophy student
Philosophy student
become
Suggestion
becomes
profitient
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
proficient
at critical and moral thinking, argumentation and debate. Whereas history helps young graduates
uderstand
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
their own culture and how their culture and country have evolved.
For example
, The world war
teachs
impart skills or knowledge to
teaches
teach
students what their forefathers experienced and suffered in the past in order to make their country what it is today. The science and business are clearly very important for our community, and those who have talent should of course pursue a university degree and a
carrierin
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career in
carrier in
those
feilds
a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed
fields
feeds
folds
.
Accept space
.
Meanwhile if
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Meanwhile, if
everyone pursue a university degree it
also
leads to
unemployemnet
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
.
For instance
In India most of universities offer
course
Suggestion
courses
for engineering. So, every year a huge amount of people re
graduting but
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graduating, but
graduating but
these
studentfacing
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students facing
student facing
problem to find jobs in
engineering feild
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the engineering field
engineering field
engineering fields
. Due to lack of jobs in market. In conclusion, I
wholehearteldly
without reserve; without reservation
wholeheartedly
whole-heartedly
disgagree
be of different opinions
disagree
disagreed
disagrees
with the statement that arts subjects should not be taught. I suggest that every student should have instruction in
philosophy
Suggestion
philosophical
history 9or0 other art subject, Even if they
elct
select by a vote for an office or membership
elect
act
elected
to
maor
of greater importance or stature or rank
major
in science for critical thinking skills.
In addition
to
this
genral
applying to all or most members of a category or group
general
training in arts subject make their contribution to society.
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