rising university fees and scare employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chance of employment. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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scenoria

an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)

scenario

numereous

amounting to a large indefinite number

numerous

issues are raising their heads unemployment is one among them. Whereas

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high in price or charging high prices

expensive

teritary

coming next after the second and just before the fourth in position

tertiary

education and less employment are chance of root causes. The fair amount of people

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

believes

that universities should offer only particular degree courses and stop teaching arts subject philosophy and history. I do not completely accord with it because it helps

gradutes

receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies

graduates

to develop

creativiteis

the ability to create

creativity

and logical thinking. To embark on subjects

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as philosophy, students learn valuable set of skills

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find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of

solve

the problem rather than passive thinkers just to memorise

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definite article

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fact and other people.

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idea.

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The philosophy student

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becomes

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having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude

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at critical and moral thinking, argumentation and debate. Whereas history helps young graduates

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know and comprehend the nature or meaning of

understand

their own culture and how their culture and country have evolved.

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, The world war

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impart skills or knowledge to

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students what their forefathers experienced and suffered in the past in order to make their country what it is today. The science and business are clearly very important for our community, and those who have talent should of course pursue a university degree and a

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career in

carrier in

those

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a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed

fields

feeds

folds

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Meanwhile if

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everyone pursue a university degree it

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leads to

unemployemnet

the state of being unemployed or not having a job

unemployment

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courses

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graduating, but

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students facing

student facing

problem to find jobs in

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the engineering field

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engineering fields

. Due to lack of jobs in market. In conclusion, I

wholehearteldly

without reserve; without reservation

wholeheartedly

whole-heartedly

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be of different opinions

disagree

disagreed

disagrees

with the statement that arts subjects should not be taught. I suggest that every student should have instruction in

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philosophical

history 9or0 other art subject, Even if they

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select by a vote for an office or membership

elect

act

elected

maor

of greater importance or stature or rank

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in science for critical thinking skills.

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applying to all or most members of a category or group

general

training in arts subject make their contribution to society.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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293 words

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