Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion
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selfish traits
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however
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, giving so much freedom to children without any restrictions at an early age can enhance their bad characters.
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independant
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, it is necessary for parents to support their children in their decisions so that they can be more determined and generation gap between parents and children can be narrowed down.
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however
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disastrous
disasters
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