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Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? Give reasons for your answer.

#freedom #speech #society
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When discussing the importance of
freedom
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 of
speech
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 in a free
society
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, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue. Some people think that minimizing
freedom
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 of
speech
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 is beneficial in order to maintain a stable
democarcy
the political orientation of those who favor government by the people or by their elected representatives
democracy
. I believe that
freedom
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 of
speech
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 is an important foundation of a free
society
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 and should be cherished. In the following essay, I will provide
argument
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an argument
arguments
 and example to support my opinion. One
reason
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reason, freedom
freedom
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 of
speech
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 is vital is because it is the foundation of a free
society
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, and without it no
society
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 can
realy
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
really
 be free. If our ability to express our thoughts is prevented, we are not
truely
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
 free, and
as a result
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 our
society
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 is not free.
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, a government that prevents a politician to state his opinion about a new law is not a free country, regardless of its definition. Another argument in favour of my opinion is that
freedom
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 of
speech
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 can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 our
society
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. As the years pass, our
society
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 progress and develop new thoughts and wishes. By being able to speak freely, these ideas can gain popularity and lead to changes in legislation and approach.
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, the African American movement in the 60's started talking about black people's rights, which
eventially
after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay
eventually
 led to a fundamental change in the government's approach towards black people. In conclusion, I strongly believe that a free
society
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 is based on
freedom
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 of
speech
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, which helps it to
progree
gradual improvement or growth or development
progress
program
 and evolve. Without it it is not a free
society
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.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of speech
  • Democratic society
  • Marketplace of ideas
  • Dissenting opinions
  • Social progress
  • Innovation
  • Government accountability
  • Transparency
  • Good governance
  • Cultural development
  • Personal freedom
  • Self-realization
  • Public debate
  • Human rights
  • Liberties
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