Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

When discussing the growing phenomenon of parents not immunizing their children, and whether
tey
people in general
they
should be made by law to immunise their children, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue. Some parents refuse to vaccinate their
child
because of religious
believes
any cognitive content held as true
beliefs
, or the fear of unwanted side effects. Others, including myself, believe that unvaccinated children are a risk to our society, and should be prevented by proper legislation. The government should legislate laws to immunise all children, because they are a risk not only to themselves, but
also
to other members of the society. Many viruses,
such
as
Mump
an acute contagious viral disease characterized by fever and by swelling of the parotid glands
mumps
, Rubella and Measles, reside within the
child
for many weeks and spread through
conctact
close interaction
contact
or saliva.
As a result
the unvaccinated
child
serves as a source of infection to other children.
For example
an unvaccinated
child
with Measles, who is flying to visit another country may expose elderly people or neonates on the
airoplain
an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets
aeroplane
. Another reason why all children should be immunized by law, is that for some deadly viruses the human body is the only known host.
This
means that without the ability to infect people, the virus can no longer survive.
Thus by
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Thus, by
vaccinating all
children we
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children, we
can lead to the eradication of many deadly diseases.
For example
, during the 50's there was a national
intiative
readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiative
initiatives
in Europe vaccinated all
cildren
a young person of either sex
children
against Polio. Due to that, there has not been a case of Polio in
europe
the 2nd smallest continent (actually a vast peninsula of Eurasia); the British use 'Europe' to refer to all of the continent except the British Isles
Europe
over 40 years.
This
indicate
Suggestion
indicates
that if all children will be vaccinated, we may
erudicate
kill in large numbers
eradicate
illnesses completely. In
cnclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, I maintain that parents should be made by law to vaccinate our children, because they pose a grave threat to other members of the community, as well as helping in the
erudication
the complete destruction of every trace of something
eradication
of diseases.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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