Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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ANCIENT LANGUAGES ARE AT THE EXTINCT LEVEL. MANY MASS BELIEVE THAT LESS LANGUAGES REDUCE THE BARRIER IN BETWEEN PEOPLE WORLDWIDE.
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ESSAY WILL CONCUR TO THE ABOVE STATEMENT BECAUSE OF ENORMOUS POSITIVE IMPACTS THAN NEGATIVE WHICH IS MENTIONED BELOW. ON THE ONE HAND. THE MAJOR ADVANTAGE OF THE FEWER LANGUAGES IS THAT IT WILL ALLOW PEOPLE TO COMMUNICATE EFFECTIVELY WITH EACHOTHER. TO ILLUSTRATE, WHEN LESS LANGUAGE PRESENT, IT IS POSSIBLE FOR PEOPLE TO KNOW DIVERT CULTURES FROM AROUND THE WORLD. BECAUSE THE COMMON DILECT MAKE THEM EASIER TO UNDERSTAND IN DEPTH.
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, THERE WOULD BE NONE RACISM THAT NUMBER OF MASS FACING TODAY.
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, INCREASE THE ECONOMY OF THE NATION BY TOURISM. FOR AN EXAMPLE, UK STUDY HAVE SHOWN THAT WHEN THERE IS ONE COMMON SPEECH, ATTRACT THE MORE PEOPLE TO VISIT THE NATION, HAVE TO EXPLORE THE CULTURE MORE EFFECTIVELY.
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, THE DISADVANTAGE OF THE LESS SPOKEN LANGUAGE IS THAT, IT LEADS TO MIGRATION OF PEOPLE FROM ONE TERRITORY TO OTHER AND
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AFFECTS THE DEVELOPING COUNTRY IMMENSELY. TO EXPLAIN, PEOPLE WILL TEND TO MOVE TO WEALTHY NATION AS IT IS EFFORTLESS TO LAND THERE.
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, IT WILL MAKE IMMIGRATION COUNTRY MORE CRAMPED.
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, IN THE PRESENT SCENARIO, ENGLISH IS BECOMING FRIST ACCENT FOR MANY COUNTRY DUE TO EXPANSION OF BUSINESS INDUSTRIES. OVERALL, LANGUAGES INDEED FUNDAMENTAL REQUIREMENT TO SURVIVE IN
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MODERN WORLD WHERE INDIVIDUALS HAVE DREAM TO LIVE HIGH-CLASS LIFE. BUT I THINK THE NATIVE LANGUAGE HAS A HISTORY AND DESERVES THE RESPECT. ITS IS BENEFICIAL TO HAVE DECREASED NUMBER OF LANGUAGES BUT
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GOVERNMENT AND INDIVIDUALS SHOULD OPT TO TAKE SOME ACTION TO PRESERVE THE MOTHERTOUNGE.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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