Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?

Shops

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Sharps

should not be allowed to sell any

food

or drink that have been scientifically

proved

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proven

to have bad effects to people’s

health

. To what extent do you agree or disagree? While some foods and drinks

have been proved

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have proven

heath-destructive, I disagree with the view that they should be prohibited in all shops. There are many reasons to believe that the sales of foods and drinks damaging to people’s

health

produces negative effects.

For instance

, some fast

food

contains excessive amount of fat and calories, and if adults consume too much of them, they will become sick, being unable to undertake

works

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work

or even to live normal lives. More importantly, some drinks,

such

as coca cola, enjoy wide

popularity

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popular

among young children. These drinks involve chemicals that can devastate human bones, and as children are in a key stage of growing up, taking these drinks can have negative

influence

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Influence

on their physical development. All these factors add up to the

thinking

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Thinking

that shops should not be encouraged to sell

health

-damaging foods and

drinks

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Drinks

.

However

, despite the serious impact

to

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of

health

, the sales of these foods and drinks should not be forbidden in all shops. Many important traditional snacks are considered unhealthy, due

to

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to, for

for example

being too oily or salty, but they are not

regarded as main

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regarded as a main

food

.Provided they are taken in minimal amount, the damage to people’s

health

is

acceptable

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Acceptable

, and people can settle the

health

problem by taking exercises.

In addition

, a

big

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The biggest

Big

proportion of these foods are fast

food

, which provide considerable benefits for people in workplaces, because it can fit into those people’s tight

schedule

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schedules

. If shops are barred from selling foods like hamburgers and sandwiches,

those

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these

people will end up in great inconvenience. In conclusion,

although

some

food

and drink are claimed harmful to

health

in scientific terms

,

Accept space

,

I believe that a comprehensive restraining order is not necessary.