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The solution to the overpopulation of this planet is education. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point with reasons or examples from your own experience.

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Education can create knowledgeable people on
overpopulation
 consequences. It can give them a realistic idea on how to manage the excess
population
. Here in
this
 essay I will discuss why education is a solution to overcome the
population
 problem. Education can provide intellect to the people to understand the consequences of over
population
 on our planet. It gives the capability to analyse the data from different parts of the
world
 to measure on how over-
population
 affects the
world
.
For example
, education enables one to read news from various countries reported that causing
population
 overcrowding. One
person
 can understand and figure out the possible ways to eradicate the problems of
overpopulation
 by educating.
Furthermore
, an educated
person
 can help others who have not necessarily the understanding of
overpopulation
. Every
person
 in
this
world
 is not educated to grasp the reason of and after effects of
overpopulation
.
For example
, India is one among the least educated
population
 in the
world
. A graduate in India could help those who are not capable to read news. Education helps to make every
person
 in our society to control
overpopulation
 with the help of knowledgeable persons. To conclude, we have discussed how education provides intellect for every
person
 in
this
world
 and how people can help each other to share the information
that is
 causing over
population
 in our society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Family Planning
  • Population Growth
  • Economic Empowerment
  • Societal Norms
  • Birth Rates
  • Government Policies
  • Healthcare Access
  • Multifaceted Issue
  • Cultural Norms
  • Long-term Changes
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