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The solution to the overpopulation of this planet is education. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point with reasons or examples from your own experience.

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Education can create knowledgeable people on
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 consequences. It can give them a realistic idea on how to manage the excess
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. Here in
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 essay I will discuss why education is a solution to overcome the
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 problem. Education can provide intellect to the people to understand the consequences of over
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 on our planet. It gives the capability to analyse the data from different parts of the
world
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 to measure on how over-
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 affects the
world
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.
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, education enables one to read news from various countries reported that causing
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 overcrowding. One
person
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 can understand and figure out the possible ways to eradicate the problems of
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 by educating.
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, an educated
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 can help others who have not necessarily the understanding of
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. Every
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 in
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world
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 is not educated to grasp the reason of and after effects of
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.
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, India is one among the least educated
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 in the
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. A graduate in India could help those who are not capable to read news. Education helps to make every
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 in our society to control
overpopulation
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 with the help of knowledgeable persons. To conclude, we have discussed how education provides intellect for every
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 in
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world
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 and how people can help each other to share the information
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 causing over
population
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 in our society.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Family Planning
  • Population Growth
  • Economic Empowerment
  • Societal Norms
  • Birth Rates
  • Government Policies
  • Healthcare Access
  • Multifaceted Issue
  • Cultural Norms
  • Long-term Changes
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