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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mr Huston, I am writing to inform you about my decision to discontinue my course at the university in the interim. Due to the time strain, my course attendance has been poor, my mid-semester assessments
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 not impressive and I have
also
 received a number of warning notices from my boss
as a result
 of some laxities at work. With the new schedule at the National stadium, I would be missing
alot
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a lot
 of classes and will find it difficult to meet up with the minimum attendance required for my course.
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 will affect my grades and ultimately ruin my chance of applying for
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student aid at the end of my sophomore year. I would like to defer my admission till the
next
 session when I would be fully ready to face my studies with the least distraction. I will be switching to a more flexible job which will require me to work only five hours in the morning
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and
 as
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 on my studies Yours Faithfully, Motolani
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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