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NEWS PLAY AN IMPORTANT PART IN MOST OF PEOPLE’S LIVES. WHY IS NEWS SO IMPORTANT TO PEOPLE? WHY IS SO MUCH NEWS DEDICATED TO BAD NEWS? SHOULD THE NEWS FOCUS ON GOOD NEWS INSTEAD?

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Coverage of recent events, and its reporting is mandatory these days,
moreover they
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moreover, they
 are essential for the majority of the people. There are manifold reasons for their importance,
although
 it has been observed that some of the content is based on
foul
Suggestion
fouls
.
However
, news must play a vital role in spreading positivity in the society. There has been a surge in the migration of people from one country to another and to some extent news play a vital role in providing authentic information to them in a foreign land. Living away from home makes them use different mediums to get connected with the current affairs of their homeland, and while doing
this
 they do not feel homesick.
However
, media at times traumatizes the public by spreading negativity in the society. The reason for focusing on the negativity in the news might be funded by some sources who do not want some nations to communicate with other nations,
therefore
 they spread hatred and negativity in the society.
For instance
, some notorious news channels take advantage of the arch rivalry between Indian and Pakistani nationals and try to induce negative feelings by publishing false news.
Nevertheless
,
media
Suggestion
the media
 should focus on publishing and
printing reliable
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printing, reliable
 news, eventually
this
 would help the nations to bond well and will have fewer differences.
Such
 essential steps are necessary for the people to live peacefully and without any hatred in their hearts for others. To conclude, people are influenced by the types of news they read or watch, so for
this
 reason it is the duty of journalists to investigate and
then
 publish authentic news.

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