Smoking is not only harm to smoker but also those who are near by.Therefore smoking should banned in public places. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Nowadays health related issues are increasing significantly. Some people argue that smoking creates high heath related issues not only the smoker but

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others around him.

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essay will discuss the drawback of smoking and

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explain why smoking should banned in places are highly important. Most of the youth stars using cigarettes or other products in their universities for an enjoyment. But later they addicted to

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habit and

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smoking in public places. Some people argue that smoking helps to reduce mental stress.

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recent survey

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a recent survey

recent surveys

conducted in India revealed the fact that about 60% of teenagers were using cigarettes in their exam seasons and interview periods.

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other category argued that smoking is useful to warm the body in cold climate.

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the number of smokers in European countries

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significantly

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compared to Asian countries. Smoking will adversely affect smokers’ physical and mental health. A recent Survey conducted in USA pointed out that excessive amount of smoking will lead mouth cancer. Smoking in public places adversely affects physical health of other people.

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a pregnant lady inhale the smoke it will negatively

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the fetus

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lead to serious

reactions in asthma or other breathing issue patients

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Smoking in front of a child make him a tendency to use

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product and will negatively

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affect

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their mental and physical development. In conclusion Smoking is not at all a good habit. So we can stay away from these kinds of bad habits and help others to lead a healthy life.

preethikishre

Oct 21, 2019

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