The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.

The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.
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The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations used throughout the commuting to work in one of the European cities in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit
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percentage.
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, a brief assessment of the chart reveals that car consumption drastically increased over 4 decades as opposed to the bus, which saw a massive drop-off in the same frame. In 1960, cars, with around 7%
commuters
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, constituted by far the lowest popularity among the listed
transportations
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.
This
figure jumped by six-fold to nearly 37% in 2000.
However
, the number of passengers commuting by Bus decreased noticeably by 25%, from just below 40% in 1960 to 15% in 2000. In terms of the train, despite the approximate 10% climb in 1980,
this
number declined to just above 20% commuters over 2 following decades.
Conversely
, tube use fell by 10% at the beginning of the period, reaching
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nearly 22% lows in 1980, before recovering again and peaking at 25% commuters in the final year.

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