The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The graph illustrates average
carbon
dioxide emissions
per person from the year
1967 to 2007 in four different countries.
Overall
, here we see that in UK
the Correct article usage
the UK
number
of carbon
emissions
was much more than any
other country. Compare to that Change preposition
in any
in
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apply
Sweden
, people were became
more Change the verb form
were becoming
carefull
about Correct your spelling
careful
carefully
carbon
emissions
.
It is noticeable that in Portugal carbon
emissions
upsurge in
a great amount Change preposition
by
of
Change preposition
apply
number
which was almost 1 metric tonnes
in 1967 and it increased just above 5 metric Change to a singular noun
tonne
tonnes
in 1997. But it remained steady from the year
1997 to 2007. On the other hand
, at first carbon
emissions
boomed between the year
1967 and 1977 in Fix the agreement mistake
years
Sweden
, which began at above 8 metric tonnes
and it increased about 10 metric tonnes
. However
, it declined dramatically from the year
1977 till the end and it stopped decreased
Wrong verb form
decreasing
at
about 5 metric Change preposition
to
tonnes
.
Therefore
, carbon
emissions
were the same in the year
2007 in Portugal and Sweden
and their amount was more than 5 metric tonnes
. Moreover
, Sweden
Change noun form
Sweden's
carbon
emissions
cast crossed Italy in 1987 and their number
was about 7 metric tonnes
when they crossed each other. At
the end, in Change the preposition
In
United
Kingdom people threw Correct article usage
the United
carbon
dioxide about 11 metric tonnes
and their number
was always high throughout the periodUnauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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