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Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There is an opinion that all new buildings must be built in
one
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style
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 as existing houses;
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, others suppose that all people should have a right to build their own accommodations in according to their own touchstones. In
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 essay, I am going to discuss both views and give my own opinion on
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 topic. On the
one
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 hand, it is very picturesque to see all houses in
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style
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.
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, many people live in densely populated areas, for them,
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 can be very annoying and stressful to see a myriad of houses in different
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
, styles or number of storeys.
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, we would not see
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 beautiful and tiny streets and buildings in the European cities because if everyone has a right to build as he wants, there would be only skyscrapers because they are very high-yielding for owners. So, the
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 point is that governments should have some restrictions on the construction.
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 means that people have to receive government approval in order to build a house in their own
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.
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, in many
countries government
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countries, governments
countries governments
 promote the idea that buildings, and
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, streets should stay in the same
style
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.
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, governments have
grants
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granted
 so as to support the restoration of old and antique houses, which have been built centuries ago.
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, owners should have rights to express their personality and build their houses as they want.
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, accommodations can be a byword of views on the modern art of
owners
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the owners
.
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, they can build astonishing and
unimagined
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 dwellings in styles which they like.
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, these buildings can bring something new on streets like new
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
 or design, and
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, all local areas will have some highlights, peculiarities. Locals can be proud that their
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
 has some differences from other districts. To sum up, despite some people arguing that all owners of
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 area should adhere to a single
style
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, others believe that everyone should be tolerable and has a right to build in their own
style
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. I am inclined to believe that all houses in
one
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 area should be in
one
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 single
style
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 because it is just beautiful when all
houses are almost the
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the houses are almost
 same.
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, other styles would be seen as a fly in the ointment.
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