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Band 4.5

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog

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I am writing
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 letter to complain
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 about the noise issue that I am facing due to your little dog barking
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 day and night. My name is Ishan Saverdekar, one of your neighbours and residing very
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 to your house. I am sorry to bring you
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attention to
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 a crucial issue happening these days. Particularly, my parents who are from very old age facing problems while watching television as well as sleeping in the night.
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, I and my family could not make good conversation with our
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 who are visiting our place in
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 festival season.
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 basic things are
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 necessity for us and require your immediate attention. I hope that your little pet might be facing some medical emergency because of why he is making so much noise. I request you to take
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 action by taking him to either animal hospital and seek
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treatment, or have a mouth cover to stop the barking voice.
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 steps will help us to have our homely
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atmosphere
. I look forward you to take
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positive and quick action against
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 vital issue as soon as possible.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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