Grandparents play a big role in bringing up the children. Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevant examples.

In
this
modren
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
era,
parent
are both involved in the work field,
thus
the
time
they spend are much less than that in the past.
in
Suggestion
In
my opinion,
grandparent
their role have increased more than before and become so important in order to fill
this
gab
a conspicuous disparity or difference as between two figures
gap
at
abcent
of
parent
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the parent
.
Thesedays
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These days
, parents usually do not have enough
time
due to their duty so some families send their kids to a
nursy
a child's room for a baby
nursery
in
time
they in work.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, if these families have
grandparent
both or just one, could help them more, which
is
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also benefits
also
benefit
to
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for
eldery
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
elderly
people to have accompany and
assisstant
a person who contributes to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose
assistants
by their grandchildren.
For example
, in Italy
their
in or at that place
there
are
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is
a house who
serive
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serves
serve
served
old people and take care
for
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of
them.
this
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This
house
also
alow
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a low
families to leave their children in the day
time
side by side with
this
eldery
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
elderly
people
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person
, which create
a
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an
atmospher
a particular environment or surrounding influence
atmosphere
of friendship between these old and young
such
as telling stories and helping them.
Therefore
,
grandparent
could help a lot
inthe
Suggestion
in the
process of growing up kids.
Furthermore
,
grandparent
are more experience than
parent
in
brinig
the act of delivering or distributing something (as goods or mail)
bringing
brining
bring
up of children, they have the
wise that
Accept comma addition
wise, that
they can share, for
instant
Suggestion
an instant
, they always teach kids how to deal
wiht
expresses the means used
with
others and moral values.
However
, sometimes grandparents fell by the generation
gab
a conspicuous disparity or difference as between two figures
gap
between
themand
Suggestion
them and
small kids, which is the
resposibility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
parent
to persuade them to be more with their
grandparent
.
in
Suggestion
In
conclusion, after a careful analysis I think that they need each other, so
the
people in general
they
have a profound impact on the growing up of their grandchildren.
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