Grandparents play a big role in bringing up the children. Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevant examples.

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belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages

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era,

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are both involved in the work field,

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they spend are much less than that in the past.

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my opinion,

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their role have increased more than before and become so important in order to fill

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a conspicuous disparity or difference as between two figures

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parent

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the parent

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These days

, parents usually do not have enough

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due to their duty so some families send their kids to a

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a child's room for a baby

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they in work.

to a very great extent or degree

, if these families have

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both or just one, could help them more, which

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also benefits

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benefit

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advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)

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people to have accompany and

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a person who contributes to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose

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by their grandchildren.

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in or at that place

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a house who

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old people and take care

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them.

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a low

families to leave their children in the day

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side by side with

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advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)

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people

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atmospher

a particular environment or surrounding influence

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of friendship between these old and young

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as telling stories and helping them.

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could help a lot

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in the

process of growing up kids.

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are more experience than

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brinig

the act of delivering or distributing something (as goods or mail)

bringing

brining

bring

up of children, they have the

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they can share, for

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an instant

, they always teach kids how to deal

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expresses the means used

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others and moral values.

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, sometimes grandparents fell by the generation

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a conspicuous disparity or difference as between two figures

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them and

small kids, which is the

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the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

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to persuade them to be more with their

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conclusion, after a careful analysis I think that they need each other, so

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people in general

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have a profound impact on the growing up of their grandchildren.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

258 words

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Grandparents play a big role in bringing up the children. Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevant examples.

Fully explain your ideas

The impact that growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people traveling by air is to increase taxes on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve the problem?

Inmany countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.