Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discussed the views and give your opinion.

Actions
Suggestion
The actions
of people, these days, have a range of untoward effects on flora and
flona
all the animal life in a particular region or period
fauna
.While some would argue that it is apparently late to curb
this
issue,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that some stringent measures would ameliorate the current status of
this
concern. Some people assume that even though we take steps to preserve our nature and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
species, it may remain futile.
This
is because all the species could not be saved for
long time
Suggestion
a long time
and they become
extincted
no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives
extinct
irrespective of the fact that how hardly we protect them.
For example
,
dudo
someone whose style is out of fashion
dodo
bird already swept away from the
earth though
Accept comma addition
earth, though
measures were taken to preserve it.
Hence
people disagree to protect
planets animals
Accept comma addition
planets, animals
and birds.
On the other hand
, some argue that
steps
Suggestion
the steps
to be taken and made into practise so as to save endangered ones.Preserving and maintaining
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
together with circumventing encroachments of their lives can help to keep up their count even in future.
For example
,
tiger
Suggestion
a tiger
, an animal in the endangered list, is protected with much more effort all over the world. Species in the world need to be protected without any
negligence though
Accept comma addition
negligence, though
some would disagree with
this
. Governments should impose strict laws on the protection of animals and birds and those who perpetrate these laws should be sentenced to punishment.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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