In some countries , the unemployment is high, therefore, some people think children should study only primary education and not secondary education as because they cannot find jobs in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It seems
unusual but
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unusual, but
true that
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true, that
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is an inevitable factor in present scenario. There has been a a magnitude or frequency relative to a time unit
rate
ranging
debate on characterized by violent and forceful activity or movement; very intense
raging
this
concern, while some people believe that primary education
is only necessary for children to get a job
Suggestion
job, hence
hence
they are unable ti
accomplish better job opportunities while centralized to their higher in the direction of
to
education
. However
, i
believe that secondary refers to the speaker or writer
I
education
is not a hindrance to get an occupation.
The fitst
mitigating factor is that higher preceding all others in time or space or degree
first
education
needs a considerable time period to prepare a juvenile to a professional individual, but it contributes cooperate and professional to a juvenile. As a result
of these practices, it is beneficial to deal with the cooperate world and professionals. And also
higher education
either inculcate
the discipline and how to elaborate the logical thinking in a profession. Suggestion
inculcates
This
can not master from
primary Suggestion
of
education
still it will neither teach how to behave with professionals nor build analytical ability which is pivotal in the work place. On the other hand
, secondary education
create
broad of opportunities in job market not only for theoretical Suggestion
creates
application but
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application, but
also
it instills important skils
; self-discipline, organization and being able to finalize a task from start to end. Namely, it assists turn into a more professional individual with many work-related skills.
an ability that has been acquired by training
skills
Consequently
, the role of primary education
is to determine broad-based enlargement of disciples. Yet, ensuring that all students are able to develop their cognitive, social, emotional, cultural and physical skills to the best way of their abilities, preparing them for their further
academic carrier
. the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
Therefore
, a disciple should engage with higher education
.
It strikes me that myriads of countries confront with their higher unemployment rate due to the lack of resources. It is necessary to engage with secondary education
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education, hence
hence
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
assits
to create a considerable demand than primary anything of material value or usefulness that is owned by a person or company
assets
assists
sits
education
. However
, with a bit of knowledge juveniles would not be able to achieve their target.
To sum up, it is true that secondary education
is not a cause for higher unemployment rate of a country. However
, individuals who wish to engage with a profession should ascertain with higher education
. Otherwise
primary education
is not enough to deal with the cooperate
community.of or belonging to a corporation
corporate
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