In some countries , the unemployment is high, therefore, some people think children should study only primary education and not secondary education as because they cannot find jobs in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It seems

unusual but

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unusual, but

true that

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true, that

unemployment

raye

a magnitude or frequency relative to a time unit

rate

is an inevitable factor in present scenario. There has been a

ranging

characterized by violent and forceful activity or movement; very intense

raging

debate on

this

concern, while some people believe that primary

education

is only necessary for children to get a

job

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job, hence

hence

they are unable

ti

in the direction of

to

accomplish better job opportunities while centralized to their higher

education

.

However

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that secondary

education

is not a hindrance to get an occupation. The

fitst

preceding all others in time or space or degree

first

mitigating factor is that higher

education

needs a considerable time period to prepare a juvenile to a professional individual, but it contributes cooperate and professional to a juvenile.

As a result

of these practices, it is beneficial to deal with the cooperate world and professionals. And

also

higher

education

either

inculcate

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inculcates

the discipline and how to elaborate the logical thinking in a profession.

This

can not master

from

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of

primary

education

still it will neither teach how to behave with professionals nor build analytical ability which is pivotal in the work place.

On the other hand

, secondary

education

create

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creates

broad of opportunities in job market not only for theoretical

application but

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application, but

also

it instills important

skils

an ability that has been acquired by training

skills

; self-discipline, organization and being able to finalize a task from start to end. Namely, it assists turn into a more professional individual with many work-related skills.

Consequently

, the role of primary

education

is to determine broad-based enlargement of disciples. Yet, ensuring that all students are able to develop their cognitive, social, emotional, cultural and physical skills to the best way of their abilities, preparing them for their

further

academic

carrier

the particular occupation for which you are trained

career

.

Therefore

, a disciple should engage with higher

education

. It strikes me that myriads of countries confront with their higher unemployment rate due to the lack of resources. It is necessary to engage with secondary

education

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education, hence

hence

it

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

assits

anything of material value or usefulness that is owned by a person or company

assets

assists

sits

to create a considerable demand than primary

education

.

However

, with a bit of knowledge juveniles would not be able to achieve their target. To sum up, it is true that secondary

education

is not a cause for higher unemployment rate of a country.

However

, individuals who wish to engage with a profession should ascertain with higher

education

.

Otherwise

primary

education

is not enough to deal with the

cooperate

of or belonging to a corporation

corporate

community.