Television has diminished the free time of people. It can make people lazy and not socialize with others. Do you agree or disagree?

The Peasant
scenaio
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
scene
in the world
,
Accept space
,
more people are watching television as a hobby and get visual information via news, in other way children who spend time with television shows
,
Accept space
,
are not communicating with society and they try to eat without jobs.
This
essay is how people manage their time with television. On the one hand, it is
commanly
under normal conditions
commonly
accepted by many that advantages
for get
Suggestion
for getting
forget
news
Suggestion
the news
as soon as
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capable of happening or existing
possible
to
distens
the property created by the space between two objects or points
distance
zones. Where people can not get internet's and mail they have only broadcast and telecasting servos,
however
; they adapted watch movie and cartoon show's
,
Accept space
,
not only that but
also
appending valuable time for
unneceassry
not necessary
unnecessary
thinks
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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