The government should allocate more funding to teach science rather than other subjects as it help in development of a country. To what extent do you agree?

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(mathematics) a mathematical relation such that each element of a given set (the domain of the function) is associated with an element of another set (the range of the function)
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paradoxically it
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has no mean to spend more finance only on science as compares to others by legislative bodies
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in the upcoming paragraphs Science is the one of the most important subject which include the studies of distinguish organs and species and which is done by many a instruments which are lot of
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costs, secondly
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doctors are
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cure of many diseases and medicines has become possible due to
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its true that it plays a crucial role in the
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the nation, but
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like art and craft and
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an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
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helps in bonding among different nations which facilitates globalisation and
westernisation
assimilation of Western culture; the social process of becoming familiar with or converting to the customs and practices of Western civilization
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motor that converts thermal energy to mechanical work
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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