During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. write a letter to this businessman, In your letter - remind him when and where you met. - tell him what kind of job you are interested in - say why you think would be suitable for the job.

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Dear

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Sam, I am writing

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letter to remind you to get a job. When I was travelling from Bombay to Ahmedabad by plane, I was sitting

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to you. While travelling we discussed a lot, and I was suggested by you for the job in your

restaurants

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and you gave me your visiting card. I completed

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of Commerce in 2016 so I would like to

work

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as an Accountant in one of your

restaurants

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. I have been working in a company for three years, so if I get a chance to

work

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in your

restaurants

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, I would definitely like to

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on the same approach. As I mentioned before that I have three years

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work

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experience as

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Accountant so I can easily

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in your workplace. I am an honest, persistent and

straight forward

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person, so I will definitely try my best for your

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. If you want my background details, you can contact

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my current employer. I look forward to hearing from you.

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sincerely, Parth Patel.

parth.ramanbhai67Wed Oct 23 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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