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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. write a letter to this businessman, In your letter - remind him when and where you met. - tell him what kind of job you are interested in - say why you think would be suitable for the job.

#plane #journey #businessman #chain #restaurants #contact #job
Dear
Mr.
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 Sam, I am writing
this
 letter to remind you to get a job. When I was travelling from Bombay to Ahmedabad by plane, I was sitting
next
 to you. While travelling we discussed a lot, and I was suggested by you for the job in your
restaurants
 and you gave me your visiting card. I completed
Bachelor
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 of Commerce in 2016 so I would like to
work
 as an Accountant in one of your
restaurants
. I have been working in a company for three years, so if I get a chance to
work
 in your
restaurants
, I would definitely like to
work
 on the same approach. As I mentioned before that I have three years
work
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 experience as
as
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an
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 Accountant so I can easily
work
 in your workplace. I am an honest, persistent and
straight forward
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 person, so I will definitely try my best for your
restaurants
. If you want my background details, you can contact
with
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my current employer. I look forward to hearing from you.
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Your
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 sincerely, Parth Patel.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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