You have an extra room in your apartment and would like to rent it out to a student. Write a letter to the university council officer. In your letter: - describe your apartment and the facilities available - mention why you want to rent out the room - say what kind of tenant you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Cibele Sales, and I am writing regarding my interest in offering to your academics a spare room to rent that
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my property. I am a resident of Banwell condo, which is located merely ten minutes by walk from the University
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. The apartment has 852 square feet, divided
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two bedrooms, two full bathrooms, a well-
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kitchen, an in-laundry, and a fair-size living room with floor to ceiling windows. The fundamental reason that motives me to rent
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extra space is that it will assist me to get my financial independence in a few years, as I have been planning to.
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, I see other social and mental benefits in having daily contact with younger generations. As a retired person, socialization is no longer frequent as used to be. Since I am older sixties, I would like to share my home with
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student who
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likes a quiet environment.
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, I would feel more comfortable
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restricting the vacancy to women exclusively, since they are commonly more organized than men. I look forward to hearing your answer about my
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. Yours faithfully,
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