Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is the case? What can governments do to help the amount of rubbish produced?

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is because the local government has a clear idea about the situations and they can make necessary legal changes to implement stricter punishment and heavy penalty. Take an air pollution as an example, citizens may be asked to reduce using personal vehicles and compel them to use the public transport or imposing carbon tax on owners of the private vehicles. These kinds of changes cannot be made universally, as these all interior matte

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of Some problems; river pollution, waste disposal and sanitation are localised issues that can be effectively managed by the local government’s timely actions. At the same time, it is the responsibility of the local authority to educate their own people about pollution, conservation of energy and the importance of protecting the nature by recycling. Local residents should be responsible for their actions. Apart from

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, the government can introduce better public transport aiming to help reduce gas emissions must be done domestically

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

260 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumerism
single-use products
landfills
recycling programs
sustainability
non-recyclable materials
throwaway culture
upgrading
advertising
packaging materials
convenience-oriented lifestyles
environmental impact
infrastructure
waste management policies
population growth
electronic waste (e-waste)

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