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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is the case? What can governments do to help the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #case #governments #amount
Solving environment issues can be done either domestically or globally. There are some problems only can be resolved by a join effort of various international communities. On the one hand, some believe that, there are some issues can be effectively controlled by d
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 is because the local government has a clear idea about the situations and they can make necessary legal changes to implement stricter punishment and heavy penalty. Take an air pollution as an example, citizens may be asked to reduce using personal vehicles and compel them to use the public transport or imposing carbon tax on owners of the private vehicles. These kinds of changes cannot be made universally, as these all interior matte
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 climate c
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 and declining marine life affect more than one country or even continents.
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of Some problems; river pollution, waste disposal and sanitation are localised issues that can be effectively managed by the local government’s timely actions. At the same time, it is the responsibility of the local authority to educate their own people about pollution, conservation of energy and the importance of protecting the nature by recycling. Local residents should be responsible for their actions. Apart from
this
, the government can introduce better public transport aiming to help reduce gas emissions must be done domestically
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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