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Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

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In recent times, countries with fast paced economy have created various enormous environmental pollution.
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 sensitization of the economy and creation of plastic alternatives will help proffer a positive and sustainable outcome.
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, a campaign for a general sensitization about the effect of environmental hazards in our environment should be established. It has been observed that residents of these countries, have limited knowledge about the negative impact of the various pollutions on our ecology.
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, the government should create effective and efficient steps towards ensuring that every individual is educated and enlightened about the various challenges that can occur if the situation is left unattended.
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 can be
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 through social media awareness programmes and the involvement of prominent citizens and celebrities of these nations. Another point to consider is the elimination of plastics from the society. Plastics have been scientifically proven to have a life span of over two hundred years before decomposition.
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, policies that will ensure a drastic reduction
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 the use of plastics in substitution
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 biodegradable products should be implemented.
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, according to a recent report published by gates foundation, it was identified that paper bags are more suitable for our environments, easy to recycle and can be transformed to
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 natural form. Thereby reducing the rapid rate of climate change. To conclude, improved steps taken by the governments to notify the economy on the disadvantages of environmental degradation and inclusion of policies that supports the use of biodegradable bags will go a long way towards creating a sustainable earth for all.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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