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Some people think painting and drawings are important as other subjects. They should be compulsory in high school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #drawings #subjects #school #education
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cause serious environmental threats. Ready meals are prepared under the most hygienic conditions and
this
 allows us to spend more time with family than cooking at home.
This
 is extremely helpful to those who are working and enables to enjoy a variety of foods.
However
, others believe that the convenient foods contain a large amount of additives and preservatives that harmful to the h
umans’
Suggestion
human
human’s
body.
Similarly
, during the process of cooking and packing the most of the nutrients are destroyed. These food’s packages cause serious environmental threats.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artistic expression
  • communication
  • self-expression
  • creativity
  • critical thinking skills
  • cultural appreciation
  • understanding
  • therapeutic benefits
  • mental well-being
  • career opportunities
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