Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is an adage that says “health is wealth”, for the individual to be in good state of well being is paramount. So

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, the availability of emergency services is expected in most countries, even though, the modern technology may not be provided.

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essay will discuss the likely causes and basic services need to be rendered in most state hospitals.

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, most people denied themselves of getting medical care because they are financially incapable, they rather employ self medication and use available fund to meet other basic needs.

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, the distance of available hospital discourages them due to lack of cash. Ignorance is another factor that affects people from visiting the clinic because they are not enlightened enough,

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affect the population of the country.

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, If the government can render basic medical services in management of common diseases

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as hyperthermia, malaria, maternal care, communicable disease like tuberculosis and

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and in all primary institutions (the health centre) will reduce the mortality and morbidity rate to a minimal level.

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, pregnant women about to deliver will be attended to, and any case needing the attention of a specialist or sophisticated medical equipment for

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test like Laparoscope, MRI (Magnetic Resonance Index) will be transferred to more equipped hospitals because these equipments are expensive to maintain and purchase, so few are available, and specialist are many. In conclusion, the implementation of fundamental medical treatment

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increases the productivity and give good census to the state. I strongly support the opinion of free medical schemes for better future of our younger generation and the Nation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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In many places, people’s lifestyle is changing rapidly and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Write at least 150 words.

Modern professional women confront a difficulty that men don’t generally face: the struggle to balance the pressures of work and home. In your opinion, how can this difficulty best be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledges and experiences.