More and more people go on traveling and touring today. What are its advantages and disadvantages? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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A lot of people nowadays, prefer to travel and plan tour to their favourite destinations. In my opinion, travel and tourism have their own advantages and disadvantages on its own risk.

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believe that,

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the advantages

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do play

a major key role over disadvantages.

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essay will focus on key pros and cons of travelling and touring. On the one hand, public

most often prefer

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most often prefers

to travel on their free time with their close friends and family. The benefit of

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trip is very beneficial for them to visit their desirable outstation so as to relax their mind and to come out of their daily routine, heavy and hectic work schedule. It

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provides them an opportunity to fulfil their desires to achieve which they couldn't due to family and other responsibilities.

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, it has several advantages, it

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also has

many disadvantages

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as, lack of focus on career goals, and

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people in general

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wish to compete for winning can turn into a major risk factor,

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instance most

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of the racers who wish to win

car race

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a car race

, when fail to take necessary precautions, lead to severe accidents and can

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lead to loss of life. In my conclusion, though, all trips and

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outing come with their benefits and drawbacks, a person can benefit themselves by utilizing most of their time by taking necessary precautions, while focusing on their other aspects of life. If, any of these fail to do so can lead to major drawback which can affect their present and future.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

256 words

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