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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in foreign country . other other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss these views and give your own opinion

#people #reason #language #travel #work #country #someone
Many may say
,
Accept space
,
and I agree, that today's city has almost erased all its borders and soon will become limitless in what concerns travelling for both work and pleasure.
Therefore
, if
this
 is to happen,
then
 learning a new
language
 is necessary. Nowadays, learning a new
language
 for the purpose of working in other countries seems to become more and more popular.Adults in need of money or
,
Accept space
,
why not
,
Accept space
,
recognison
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
recognition
 are trying to pursue their happiness for away from home.
Also
, the
hey days
the period of greatest prosperity or productivity
heydays
 of employers looking only for capable people have gone. It seems that today's employees are looking not only for multi-skilled employees, but they
also
 want people who
now
be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about
know
 more than their mother tongue. Sooner or Later, those who
amitted
declare to be true or admit the existence or reality or truth of
admitted
omitted
 learning more are prone to become jobless.
However
, to my mind, a new
language
 should not be learned just for travelling or working in
foreign country
Suggestion
a foreign country
foreign countries
. A foreign
language
 should help to learner broaden his mind. By
this
 I mean that the new
language
 should and will allow us to understand more about the word itself
,
Accept space
,
and maybe our ancestors' ways of thinking and acting. Needless to say, knowing
language
Suggestion
the language
 will help us when it comes to understanding the human race, because
language
 is the
first
 poem of a country. All of
this
 being said, I believe that learning a different
language
 should be not only for satisfying our physical need
s
Accept space
,
,like money, but
also
 our moral need
s
Accept space
,
,because never before had
such
 a big thirst for knowledge been disabled
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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