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It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people argue that the beauty of a building is less important when compared to serving a purpose and I agree with
this
 notion.
Therefore
, architects should worry less about the beauty of a buildings long as it is functional. A building can be beautiful and have a weak foundation. If care is not taken, it might fall which makes it a total waste of time and money.
Forinstance
Suggestion
For instance
, I have visited a prison in Nigeria once and not it wasn’t aesthetically pleasing to look at but it is secure and holds a lot of inmates at the same time. There are other ways to make a building beautiful asides
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 structure. It can be painted, flowers can be planted around it and a decorator can be contracted to make it look pleasing to the sight. All in all, a beautiful building is most people’s dream.
However
, the better question is does it serve
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 purpose?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • prioritize
  • building design
  • meet the needs
  • occupants
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • landmarks
  • symbolize
  • balance
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