You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as:

#minutes #bank #receipt #card #envelope #head #office #concern #address

Dear Sir/ Ma, I am writing to inform you about the absence of my credit

card

in the parcel delivered by your bank branch yesterday. Since I was not at home to receive the parcel in person, the missing item could not be detected immediately. After completing all necessary

documentaion

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documentation

for my newly opened account

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last

Thursday, I was informed that all personal effects related to the account would be delivered to my residential address after five days which I did receive, but without the credit

card

This

is very worrisome as I feel exposed, and my account

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a high risk of being hijacked and all my savings cleaned out due to the sensitivity of the details inscribed on the

card

I look forward to hearing from you soon, in order to let me in on your plans to get the

card

across, my plan to travel is about to be wrenched! Yours faithfully Motolani Johnson.

Submitted by motolanid on Fri Oct 25 2019

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

158 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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