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You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Describe the training course you want to do Explain what the company could do to help you Say how the course will be useful for your job

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Some people believe that understanding of person’s custom and personality based on what they wear is feasible. I totally agree with
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 will discuss what people’s situation and thoughts have great impacts on their choice of
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 who live in Antarctica their fashion are distinguished in comparison with habitats of Africa. Other items
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 as kind of job, religion, even climate change are involved in the selection of clothing. a woman who has a hijab person seems to be a Muslim or a person who wears
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 in a cold area. As a whole speaking, a person’s
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 is predictable according to what they prefer to wear dresses. People’s thoughts and beliefs are reflected in their
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, those who are happy
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choose happy colours for their dress or a disciplined person choose kind of
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 that are fit for him or her. Sometimes people choose their
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 based on what they imagine their selves in their dreams. Undoubtedly great power of imagination is so obvious that it has proved. According to William James, the father of modern psychology from the U.S said, whatever we are and whatever we choose in our life is connected to our imaginations. To conclude, from my point of view, people’s situation and personality are the two most important issues that have a powerful impact on their choice
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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