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Essay topics: As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Several new electronic inventions in
20th century
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the 20th century
 were
computer
 and
television
. In the past, people
have
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had
 more activities and didn’t get their activities with high technologies. Nowadays,
inhabitants
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the inhabitants
 are very familiar with the technologies. In the developing countries, each other to compete and create new inventions which have
negative and positive effect
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a negative and positive effect
 in the future.
Computer
 and
television
 are used almost everybody in the
world
. It is hard to imagine what things would be like today without them. Everyone is using computers for business and pleasure. Computers are very helpful some people
to do
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doing
 their jobs. Many offices, universities, schools, supermarkets and the other places need
computer
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a computer
. With
computer
, make people do many works easier, you can watch video, play games, and
also
 browsing the internet. Computers are
also
 used by medicine in
hospital
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the hospital
hospitals
. Now and in the future, medicine
need
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needs
computer
 technology
for
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to
 support their activity.
Television
 is one of the entertain everyone who necessary
for
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to
 relax, laugh, and find news. Almost every householder in the
world
 has
television
.
Everyday
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Every day
 people spend their free time with
television
 and it is already
influences
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influencing
 human in the
world
. Sometimes they spend
they
of them or themselves
their
 leisure all day for lazy and make
our
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
 body overweight.
Computer
 and
television
has
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have
influence
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influenced
 and affected our everyday life. It
is make
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is made
has made
 inhabitants do less physical activity and
also
 make a tremendous impact on our lives.
Human
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A human
 who
are
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is
 always in front of the screen, will give bad effects to the body and eyes.
Body
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The body
 will feel stiff muscles, and the eyes will feel irritation.
Also
, It’s
make
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made
 bad our healthy. In conclusion, I agree because people who often use
computer
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computers
 and
television
 make people do less physical activity, and
this
 is having a negative effect on their health. Indeed, everybody in the
world
 needs
computer
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a computer
 and
television
.
However
, sometimes we
have remembers
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were remembering
are remembering
 that we must be to exercise before and after use it.
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